I am going to apply the postgraduate program(MSc in Strategic and Digital Market

I am going to apply the postgraduate program(MSc in Strategic and Digital Market

I am going to apply the postgraduate program(MSc in Strategic and Digital Marketing (SDM))for university.(Rennes School of Business)
EACH question answer should be 150-200 words.
And I write a rough draft for question 1 and 2….
you have two options:
1. polish my answers 1 and 2(because my English is bad, you need to help me polish them). But you need to follow the mark instructions which I upload. you need to mark the polished part. use different colors to show your polishment and add some review. and write answers for 3,4,5.
2. If you think my answers 1 and 2 are too poor quality, you can rewrite them based on my information you can choose to rewrite 1 and 2, and finish 3,4,5.
Both two options, you need to add review like the image shows(if you write a new one, you need to comment the old one, you need to state why you think my work is poor. what mistakes I has in My work.)