Certainly, it is essential to address the instructions and revise this research

Certainly, it is essential to address the instructions and revise this research

Certainly, it is essential to address the instructions and revise this research thesis in accordance with the feedback provided in the attached Word document.
Additionally, a thorough grammar and language review should be conducted to enhance the overall quality and presentation of the research draft. Subsequent changes should be made to improve its overall coherence and readability.