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Please only focus on the comments in the margin and the Lit. Review section pages 18-26. The comments from my advisor start on page 19 which is also the Lit. Review.
I only need the writer to focus on this section and more specifically, the conceptual framework. This section just needs to be cleaned up. The following are the things I need to clean up in the conceptual framework:
1. Make sure all section headings connect with the information in the paragraph.
2. The section “Poor Learning Conditions” needs to be changed to “Impact of student mobility and success on standardized test” , this is on page 23.The section needs to have sources that support military connected students and the high rate of mobility and how mobility affects learning.
3. The section on page 25, “Strategies for teaching military-connected students” needs to clearly state strategies, they can be listed with an explanation of each strategy in this section.
4. The broader review needs to have studies that talk about poor learning and how it affects students and more importantly, AP students.
5. The comments made by my advisor from pages 19 to 26 are minimal, however, they need to be corrected.
I do not need the additional 2,000 or so words added. I think once the writer looks at the work they will only need to add 2 maybe 3 more pages…they may not have to add anything, just change what I already have. Please let me know if this can be completed by Sunday, Monday at the latest. Again, the focus is only pages 18-26 and the 2 sections I mention above that need to be cleaned up.