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I need the following corrections on the attached document
DAP Background – good.
DAP Aims – good.
DAP Methods – you plan to interview only one person but generally a good qualitative data collection instrument should involve interviewing several people to get different viewpoints. 28 questions are too many. You need to trim them down and consolidate.
Dummy tables and charts that show how the results will be presented were not included as required. How will you analyze the interview responses? I don’t see the role of linear regression in your analysis.
Revisions to Milestone 3 done based on feedback included.
Page 8 – I think you meant ‘Therefore,’
They are determining the sample’s age and age groups aids in providing how different groups respond to technology as well as its effects.
Page 12: This sentence does not make sense.
The holes in data computing security indicate that security issues need to be investigated inadequacies.
Page 14: A citation is required in this sentence.
According to Dawoud, cloud computing is majorly based on technology that is virtualized and that offers scalability, a manageable environment, and security.
Pages 15 and 16:
The content on the lower half of page 15 and the upper half of page 16 is poorly organized. The bulleted points can be organized in a better way.
You should resubmit this assignment.