Only 5 paragraphs including conclusion, 2 pieces of evidence in each body paragr

Only 5 paragraphs including conclusion, 2 pieces of evidence in each body paragr

Only 5 paragraphs including conclusion, 2 pieces of evidence in each body paragraph, establishes a central idea/argument related to the assignment but could clarify or sharpen the focus more. Most paragraphs/content is apparently related and adequately conveys information appropriate to the assignment or established focus. Most ideas/information is connected or linked through organization and/or transitions.
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