Pick a paragraph from your Persuasive Research Paper to revise for cohesion usin

Pick a paragraph from your Persuasive Research Paper to revise for cohesion usin

Pick a paragraph from your Persuasive Research Paper to revise for cohesion using the principles and methods from the reading. Then provide the following in a document:
A copy of the original paragraph from your paper
A copy of the revised paragraph from your paper
A 150-word explanation of which methods you used to make the paragraph more cohesive, clear, and connected, and how you plan to use what you’ve practiced here to revise the rest of your paper. Clearly identify the names of the methods you used.
THE ATTACHED PARAGRAPH THAT MUST BE USED.