Please carefully review the information attached below. To be completely honest,

Please carefully review the information attached below. To be completely honest,

Please carefully review the information attached below. To be completely honest, if there comes a point where you need to over-emphasize certain things that may not have exactly happened, please do so. The information I included not only details the program and the application questions, but a deeper look into who I am. Please feel more than free to use my sob story.
Make sure to check out the link for the program’s description. The tone I want to convey is that I am ready to serve, to learn, and no one else is more willing and passionate about doing so than me.
A little random, but just a reminder that this program I am applying to is from my current school. I am now a sophomore who was a transfer at my previous institution, UCLA.