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Question3 in re submission file (instructions are there ).I attached file UBER that i get low mark answer and The following comments that I received previously am requesting to avoid them in this paper
Knowledge and understanding of the topic/ issues under consideration
Your work is missing supporting evidence – matters discussed in text are not common knowledge and must be referenced. You work requires academic backing up, especially when you provide a definition of something, like the definition of sustainability.
You have focused on Uber’s plans and upcoming future for example by becoming a fully electric, zero-emission platform by 2040. A lot of your debate is on what Uber is committing to do, which is also fine, however more focus should be put on reflecting on the sustainability of current operations. Therefore arguments where you define the current eco-friendly business model that reduces risks and creates more opportunities to gain support from the public and stakeholders should be presented in more depth.
Overall you have focused on explaining the operations which are not fully related to the content of the assignment, and have explained the customer base and satisfying the customers, the competitors pricing strategy and so on in too much detail.
Your arguments on managing human capital and concerns around legal ambiguities as to whether the drivers are employees or independent contractors are very valid however they need to be in-text referenced as it is not common knowledge.
You have explained how Uber could enhance its CSR by discussing maximisation of value creation by focusing on various aspects such as the health of the communities with attention directed at nutrition, medication, and sanitation. However, I think that applying one of the frameworks for the analysis including a Carroll’s pyramid would have helped you to be more structured about the analysis.
I think that your recommendations to enable the organisation to more effectively manage its operations in the future and reduce any identified social “wastes are not robust and require further details as well as in-text references and a critical stance.
Criticality
Sadly, you have shown a weak demonstration of critical analysis, thought and/or reflection, with regards to linking theory and practice where appropriate.
Use of relevant sources
Satisfactory evidence of familiar or module reading/ use of source material adequately used in support of your work. Sadly, sources such as https://www.vault.com/, https://www.linkedin.com, and https://www.kochiesbusinessbuilders.com.au are not credible and academic, and while it is fine to use them, they should be complemented by a range of credible sources.
Structure and Presentation (as detailed in the assessment guidance)
A very good structure and presentation but may have some omissions against the guidelines. There are some minor omissions when it comes to your writing- for example the words century or non-governmental should not be capitalised whereas CO2 should be.
Independent working
Overall you have demonstrated a satisfactory ability to take ownership of individual area of work and work autonomously in order to complete the assignment.
Academic integrity
You have demonstrated good level of presentation, good use of English grammar and syntax. However, please note that use of contractions such as don’t instead of do not is not allowed in academic English. In-text the year needs to go into brackets- so Berger et al., 2020 should read Berger et al. (2020). Likewise, the year of the references under the reference list should be in brackets too.

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