These items need to be fixed:
analyze the existing metrics used to measure the
These items need to be fixed:
analyze the existing metrics used to measure the benefits of that specific technology. You are still describing not analyzing the metric. Identify a metric used by another facility to measure the benefits of your specific selected educational technology. What were their findings? Was that metric successful in identifying the benefits of the technology? How does that support your proposal for adoption of the specific educational technology? You have a section where you discuss the gap analysis function, but this is not metrics used to identify the benefits of the educational technology you are recommending for adoption.
You discuss several educational technologies. First, work to identify one specific educational technology you want to propose for adoption. Keep the focus of your writing on that one specific educational technology chosen. Then, you will want to identify for the reader what the mission of the facility is (cite appropriately). Once the mission is identified, work to explain how your chosen educational technology aligns with the strategic mission of an organization. Find two or three relevant articles as resources of support to your argument. Adding validation from the literature will support your ideas. What are the benefits of this technology and how do they support or further the mission of the facility?
You did provide minimal support to your writing. However, most of your work lacks adequate supporting literature. Citing your sources is important for a variety of reasons, including giving the proper credit to the authors of the sources you use, provides readers information on where to get more information about your topic, adds credibility to your message, and prevents any form of plagiarism. Citations should be provided any time you use an exact quote or when you restate or paraphrase an idea from a resource. All resources cited should be included on the reference page at the end of your paper and should be current (between 3- 5 years if possible). The easiest way to prevent plagiarism is by correctly noting your sources during research and citing your sources in your writing and presentations. A good rule of practice is to use three or four supporting articles and compare their findings to your suggestions or propositions to add value to your argument.
