This is a Capstone project for senior year. Please check my thesis statement.
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This is a Capstone project for senior year. Please check my thesis statement.
And here is the teacher’s feedback for my thesis statement: I do think the thesis statement is stronger. It’s sets up something that you’ll need now to prove in the paper. In looking at the rest of the text you included, am I right to understand the paragraphs are the summaries of articles you’re planning on citing? I am asking because they are written in the style of the academic article summaries one finds when searching Jstor, and they don’t feel integrated into a contiguous argument. I think that when it comes time to expand those paragraphs with specific details for each case, they will read better. You can also include images to amplify your points. Also a question I think I will have is how, if at all, the rebranding strategies for nonprofits differ from those employed by for-profit corporations.
The sources look good–I would remind you, however, that an organization’s own materials are written for their own interests and aren’t as strong as independent scholarly analysis from outside the organizations (it looks like you’re citing a WWF publication).
Based on this, please write a Capstone Essay! For conclusion part focused on design principles cuz my major is Motion Graphics. And I need to rebrand some non-profit organizations based on the conclusion.
Comments from Customer
Discipline: Design Rebranding
Customer is an international student. Please, provide a regular grammatically correct, well-structured paper according to the instructions and academic context provided, written with simple sentence structures and easy vocabulary (or shortly, use simple English).
