This is the feedback I received. Please fix as feedback. (Editing the Thesis Sta

This is the feedback I received.
Please fix as feedback. (Editing the Thesis Sta

This is the feedback I received.
Please fix as feedback. (Editing the Thesis Statement and outline(If you have words left, please write at least a little on the conclusion.))
I want to challenge you to narrow your thesis further. It is not possible in a 9-page paper (or even in a book) to cover the relationship of advertising and AI in general – this is too broad. Is there a particular sector of advertising you could focus on (for example, the marketing of toys, automobiles, music, etc.)? Or is there particular ad campaign, brand, or advertiser that you could examine? Also, you should tie this in to your own position as an artist – what are the implications of AI for artists who want to work in advertising?
Try answering these questions and send me a more focused thesis. Also, I would like to see an outline of your paper/project the next time we meet.

I am going to examine into this ad.
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Customer is an international student. Please, provide a regular grammatically correct, well-structured paper according to the instructions and academic context provided, written with simple sentence structures and easy vocabulary (or shortly, use simple English).

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