The feedback for the qualitative portion of my paper was not good. I have attach

The feedback for the qualitative portion of my paper was not good. I have attach

The feedback for the qualitative portion of my paper was not good. I have attached what I wrote, the feedback I received, the list of survey questions, the list of interview questions, and the color-coded transcriipts from the interviews.
Please revise the qualitative portion of my paper to comply with the feedback.